Monday, April 25, 2011

Sam - The Evacuation

neeeeeeeeeeeeerinnnnngggg "the raid Siren get to the bunker" Eric shouted franticly.It had sta rted
World War II Eric and Sonya ran to the bunker. Sonya was watching in horror seeing the ruble flying past her head and the german planes up ahead and flames and people being blown into smitherins. "come on sonya not far to the bunker" "what about our little boy dave" "he is safe i know it" there was a loud whisiling in the air then a bang. They were gone....                 ONE    WEEK   EARLIAR         


"Happy birthday to you happy birth day to you"every one chanted to me."Three cheers for Dave"
hip hip hooray hip hip hooray hip hip hooray" there was a knocking on the door "Il get it Sonya" said dad i poped my head out the window and had seen a MK-II militry jeep and two left hand 2nd luitenet's at the door i could tell this by their badges.                         TWO  DAYS   LATER


It was true England was at war with germany and i was going to my old house in devon barstaple muddiford my nanny lives there now. Im so glad im going there instade of someone elses house when i was at the door i rang the door bell and then she greeted me with a smile and i was full of joy.

2 comments:

  1. WWW: Nice use of wow words.
    EBI: Punctuation could have been better.


    Josh

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  2. Brilliant story!! You created a great picture of what was going on, you describe things really well. Just try to remember capital letters for names of people, places and 'I'.
    Sharon

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