Wednesday, October 13, 2010

The Mighty Battle by Keagan

The mighty battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

One day there were two people called Grazle and Joleten. They looked very much like a poler bear and a dinosaur. They live in a huge town in South Africa called jhounhanseberg. They were wonderful people and  they always helped their friends and the other people who looked like them . One day grazel and joleten went for a walk throw the dark and soggy forest when they came across a volcano with  a huge house on the side it.  When grazle and joleten looked closer they saw two men.   One man was wearing black and red armor so they went closer to see what the men were talking about.

Serjents appearance
 
There they hid under a vast rock and herd them say “Are we ready to go?”  All of a sudden they heard the word battle. “Oh no, why do they want to attack  us” said jolten “Probably for food and money and also land . So we’ve got to be ready.” Out of no where this strange man  came to them and said  “Come with  me. Wait, what’s your name?  Serjent ok grazle and joleten where so nervous  they could barely walk in. In their head they were  thinking “What are they going to do to us?”

In avalots enormous house  !!!!!!

Where are we said joleten . You well see said serjent. When are we going to get there shut up you’ve been saying that every five minutes.  Any way we are there know when they got there they saw the enormous monster named avalot listen im going to attack your town I need your food and your  people as my army. im going to take of the world im going to kill every one in my way .after that grazle and jolten  pushed srejent  and some of avalotes army. as they where running  jolten said we have to warn them.


In the the forest

Where are we said joleten in the forest you idiot. Some times you can be so stupid. Any way. I think were there know but chest to late said jolten siad but where are our people maybe the day watcher saw them coming what’s a  day watcher said jolten you have be en livening with as 2000 years and you steal don’t  know what a day watcher is. Well I have to say im a bite Dum. a bet a bit Dumb. okay lets stop fighting!!!.know we have  figure out where they are! Okay but can you stop shouting. Ohh chest shut up. 


My second story is coming out SOON!!!!

1 comment:

  1. wow your story is amazing i am exited about your second story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Thanks hyun-Tak

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