The Big Plan (Chapter 1) by Joshua

The Big Plan!

This is a story about a very friendly boy called Joshua.  Joshua lived in a humongous house in the middle of a marvellous area called Mirdif.

Joshua liked to spend a lot of time at his friend’s house, his friend was called Keagan. Keagan’s house was not as big as Joshua’s. On a steaming hot day in the middle of summer, which felt like it had lasted for 5 years, Joshua was bored. Even though Joshua could go to his friends house, Joshua didn’t feel like it. But when he switched on his 100 inch T.V, the news reporter wasn’t talking about floods, crashes or anything like that. In fact, it was a robbery! Not before very long, Joshua had a vision. He knew who was under this. Joshua blurted out "Louis!" He knew it. And who is Louis you ask? Joshua spectacularly, knew who Louis was and so did his one of his good friends, Keagan. I discovered that Louis is a name  for a person. But Louis was more than a normal calm human being. He acts like a vicous creature that is greedy for zillions of money. Louis lived on a roof top in the extremely famous city named Paris. He was pleasant until 1996. On that very year on October 15^th it was his 10^th birthday. It was a glorious day for Louis. Unfortunately it was colder than Antarctica outside. However, it got worse. Nobody except for his Mum,  turned up. After that, he bought himself a superhero comic book. Sometimes, he would throw the book away and forget the comic book and he calls it waste of money however, this time he was interested because well it was the end. In the beginning there were smart stuff to learn like it tells you what the volume of the something but at the very end of the huge, boring, comic book it said: Do you want to be a evil inventor? If you do please call this number that will call Dr Evillino on 257938888710 if not please call 1726390478 thank you!

At that very moment Louis was a selfish greedy person. Outstandingly, he did not want to grow up like his dad in fact, he wanted to follow Dr Evilleno’s footsteps. At that very moment, someone rang the doorbell which is louder than airplane flying over your head. Coming! Joshua shouted. He zoomed down all the stairs. Joshua regretted what he had done because he could have used the lift which was sometimes pathetic because well it was made from a company called zooloo which lived in a soaking island in the middle of the ocean. Joshua then answered the humungous door. Keagan! Joshua shouted although it was louder than his doorbell Joshua didn’t care. Keagan was one of Joshua best friends. Besides, Keagan hardly went over to Joshuas house. Keagan was indeed a very likeable 10 year old boy. His mother worked at the local toy factory. Even though Keagan has a ton of games like PS3, Xbox 360, Wii and a lot MORE! He was sometimes very gloomy. Joshua told Keagan what was going on in Paris however, Joshua did not say it as bravely as he thought he would. In fact, he said it like it was the most important thing in the world. But it was at the moment because the vicious explosion killed approximately 5000 people in total. It was too strong though because after the bank robbery, Louis broke his big foot so he used all the parts he had to build a robotic leg which was a wee bit smaller than my foot but anyway, at least it worked! However, Joshua came up with a plan that could change everything……

To be  concluded…