Jakes fantastic medicine

     

                                                         By Hyun-Tak

Once a boy called Jake and his Dad lived in California, His dad was a triple millionaire so he had everything he wanted. He was also smart so he won many writing, reading, science competitions. His classmate was jealous of him. But one day his family came to visit him.” Come down Jake”, said dad.” Coming down,” replied Jake (happily. Because he did not have any friend near by.)  He had   played with his cousin play station2 and 3, He was very happy because he liked playing with people. His best dream was to have a little brother. But unfortunately his mum past away when he was born in New York. After playing with his cousin, his family was about to go home. Then Jake asked his dad   if he (his cousin who called James)   could have a sleep over.  But unfortunately dad replied ‘no’. And went off saying’ good night’. Jake was little bit sad but he was happy and wrote in his diary "today 27th october happy" and went off to sleep. But before he did that he packed his bag before tomorrow so, he could go to school early not late. Then went off (again) to sleep. After 4hours he slept he woke up because  he wanted to go to the toilet. But he realised his dad wasn't here so, he went downstairs to living room so he could get the his family home phone saw he could call his dad. He tried to call him but he left his mobilephone. He opened his house front door. But he coulden' belive what he saw. To be medicineued......